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Zimmer483

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Мъъъър ^^

Zimmer483

Цитат:

can you see in these eyes
that they are keeping somewhere inside
too much tears are falling
too much dreams are dieing
we are waiting too long
our time to come
can you call our smiles
don't want to restrics ourselves in whispers
when you're on the stage you make the stars twinkle

lets outshout this world
lets make our dream a truth
when we can scream with you
why we have to restrict ourselves in whispers...
take me by the hand
allow us to show you how big can be one love
let us to believe that nothing is impossible!

can you hear our distant scream
can you feel our distant fear
that we can never see you...
let us to believe in you
make our ideals real
make our dreams possible
make us to don't want you to go!

ето го моето Very Happy

woow много е хубаво I love you

де и аз да имах талант за подобни творби..

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Мъъъър ^^

RaiseYourHands

Вики страхотно е, наистина ме впечатли, много малко хора могат да пишат подобни неща на чужд език, а ти си го направила страхотно <3

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I will never let you fall
I'll stand up with you forever

I'll be there for you through it all
Even if saving you sends me to heaven

toms_litle_girl

аз просто нямам думи Shocked

велико е меко казано lol!

bambi

Zimmer483 написа:

Цитат:

can you see in these eyes
that they are keeping somewhere inside
too much tears are falling
too much dreams are dieing
we are waiting too long
our time to come
can you call our smiles
don't want to restrics ourselves in whispers
when you're on the stage you make the stars twinkle

lets outshout this world
lets make our dream a truth
when we can scream with you
why we have to restrict ourselves in whispers...
take me by the hand
allow us to show you how big can be one love
let us to believe that nothing is impossible!

can you hear our distant scream
can you feel our distant fear
that we can never see you...
let us to believe in you
make our ideals real
make our dreams possible
make us to don't want you to go!

ето го моето Very Happy

woow много е хубаво I love you

де и аз да имах талант за подобни творби..

Съгласна съм. Въпреки, че има леки грешки в самите изрази. Пак се схваща смисъла. Но все пак това не е родния език и е разбираемо и смело. Браво!

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